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Alright mix

The Piano should be something liek the Harp/ Xlyophone.
The Arp with the flute needs to be turned up a bit.
The guitar tuned down a tad, otherwise its good mix!

Cam3leon responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on it!

Okay

The guitar/lead neads a bit turning down.
The Bas needs to be a tad turned down as well.
(Oh you should check out my remix of this song :D )

Cam3leon responds:

Yeah I did make it pretty bass heavy. The guitar's sound though was to ensure that the melody stuck out but yeah, it could use a little less volume. I need to work on evening the sound out, but thanx for the feedback!

Equalizer Problem

I can Bareley Hear the Orchestra hits, Plus the Instruments fade in/ out from eacher (ie. Lead is overtaken by rythm)
the Strings itself are good, but need to be turned down, the Tubular Beels need to be turned up a bit, The flute instrument needs to be pumped a little.
The Percussion needs to be dabbed down a bit.
This is a Good mix, all it needs is a little equalizing work..

Dont mind those two,

heres what I'd like to see.
A little bit of Equalizing work would be nice.
The Lead Guitar needs to be a Pumped up cause it Blends in with the Rythm a bit,
and the Bass itself needs a bit pumping up as it kinda fades in when the Drums/Lead/Rythm Kicks in.
What would be nice would be some Guitar Soloing.
-=-=-=-=
This is a Alright song but it can be better, Focus on Harmonizing the instruments cause right now as it currently stands, they are clashing with eachother a bit, oh and the Ending where theres one song, you need to fix that a bit with like a 1 Chord ending.

Remember Equalizing the Volume of the AMPS and Instruments is Key.

Kuebic responds:

I agree that some equalizing work is needed. I have done my best to equalize it, but after my earlier attempt, I set my priority on volume because it was like twice as soft as this, and I wanted a more punch to it, so raising the volume is a great way to do it, ruining my equalization work as I did. There was a reason why I didn't just raise the master volume... I think it was because one track got too loud, so I had to change that, which led to a domino effect of changeing the other tracks, and so on.

Anyway, Thank you for confirming the direction I needed to go, and a 100X better review than the other two.

needs work

The notes are off. It seems you neet to spend a little bit more time on the Fretting there my friend.
Practice a bit till you get a "feel" for a song to the point where you can do it flawlessley without reading teh Guitar tabs,
remember dude, practice!
~kudos~

milkshakemudkip responds:

i dont actualy know the tabs 4 it i imprivised and iv bin practising it 4 6 weeks

some of the notes gone wrong was i kept touching my mouse cus i recorded it with camtasia studio cus i dont have any audio recording software

Off the wall!

I really like the buildup and how the Bg synths kick in about 0:15
then teh beat at 0:30 and anotehr somewhat change at 0:45.
Actually its a Nice transition. with the piano around 1:30.

good work.
~kudos~

MSXOmega responds:

Thanks!

okay but

what kinda throws me off is teh Equalizing job. To me it just sounds like theres 2 instruments Drums/ Piano. The Background instrument is Bareley noticable. and the strings are as well.
After a good equalizing job this would be good.

good

Here's where it went wrong.
The Instruments themselves are a Good choice, but between them all its wayy to distorted, especially the bass.
What this song needs is an Equalizing job done.
Keep at it
~Kudos~

knuxrouge responds:

Yeah, the harp I used was distorted.
I had a really tough time mixing this, but I guess the only way to get better is to keep at it.
Thanks.

Nice

the Structual Foundation is Great, the Choices of instruments are Nice.
This is still Cinema Quality stuff.
Keep at it.
~kudos

good

Nice Composition and overall theme.
The Song Flows Incredibly well.
the instruments are niceley timed, feels like im in a Cinema When i listen to this.
Can't wait to hear 18, (curse the newgrounds Upload limit) Lol

~Good Job~

~Kudos

Setu-Firestorm responds:

lol Yeah, but I don't mind doing 2 a day.

Thank you for the feedback.

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