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This is perfect

For a introduction to a show.

This song is perfect

For when you break into homes, smash their shit. and get some hearts!

I wish

somehow it was a bit more faster. That would increase the epicness!

one thing missing...

the chimes- that would bring this together

Kickin' Kick and Ravin' Leads

The Lead synths around 0:35-0:40 Need some more depth.
The snare is hiding it's faint but I can hear it.
The Piano does get a Bit repetitive though.
When the Piano takes a hike for the synth near the end, seems like it needs a bit more of a transition to it, don't know how'd it work.

MSXOmega responds:

The thing around 0:35 - 0:40 is a high pass filter, it's supposed to do that. :P The snare was originally louder, but I think a more minimalistic approach fits it better. As for the piano, I didn't really figure out how to make it transition well, I agree that it sounds kinda weird there. Thanks for the review!

Nice

---Great song, I do see that it is not truly done--

Perhaps a Trailer/ The Sweeping synths hind behind the music. The little trance-ish Plucks in the beginning sound a bit off the "Dammit, they're overshadowing me" bit.
The Piano could use some change-up in the melody. To be honest at around 2:53 it really makes me believe that it's gonna be a energetic portion/ Or perhaps a Buildup leading to an Energetic burst. This song seems too "Middle" Heavy. or it sounds as if most of the Backup/ Background Synths/ Pads/ Swells are on one Side.
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From what I'm hearing. I believe this can be used for...
1.) A Video Game Introduction Sequence, or a Video Game Trailer.
2.) This does sound like a "Yeah I'm going to exact my lawful revenge on you for what you did" type of thing, in where the Main character is indeed innocent, However due to Self Guided Justice and Delusions believes that he's the person who took all things precious away.
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After all and all, I can't wait for this song to be finished, and see what's there!
-Keep up the good work!

MSXOmega responds:

Thanks! I can see what you mean by the song being too middle heavy, I'll be sure to change it if I finish this. :P

This should be

in the top 5

Oh god this was Godly shit

Then the vocals Showed up....and trashed the party.

it's alright but

it needs a higher bpm. :(

Suggestion

How about Mute City...I'd love to see you do that!

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